Cindy Knoke’s blog post (link to Cindy’s blog at the end of this post) about viewing dolphins reminded me that I had a scene in my novel, “Orion’s Gift,” that was very similar to her adventure. I wrote that scene after the Captain and I had this very experience in a 12-ft. aluminum skiff many years ago. It is based almost completely on our own dolphin trip from when we were dry camping in Baja and the dolphins came into the Bay of Conception.
The excerpt is a bit long, but I hope you will bear with me and enjoy the ride.
In the novel, my character, Sylvia, has run away from her unraveling life in southern California. Without much planning she has bought a camper van and thinks she can escape her problems by dry camping on the beaches of the Baja peninsula on the Mexican side of the border.
She meets Kevin, another runaway from a bad marriage, and the two discover an unexpected attraction to each other.
Here is the dolphin scene from “Orion’s Gift.” (Notice the whitecaps in the photo above.)
Moments later, I pointed. “There!” Kevin started the motor and, at a slower, quieter speed, angled the boat towards the school’s probable destination, so that eventually our paths would cross.
Hundreds of sleek bodies broke the surface only to curve and dive down immediately and reappear a few yards farther on. Kevin cut the motor again and we drifted, a mere speck in the middle of the huge Bay of Conception, closer than we had hoped to a huge school of dolphins, all aiming for the head of the bay.
“Listen to them!” I whisper-shouted to Kevin. The mewling, whistling, singing, and crying, as they repeatedly broke the surface of the water, was an eerie choir piece. Hauntingly beautiful, it gave me goosebumps in spite of the warm day. Kevin’s face mirrored my feelings exactly—somewhere between awe and ecstasy. My mind was suddenly in turmoil, balancing this rare and precious moment with the realization that I probably had few of them left. Peaks of happiness and bottomless pits of misery played havoc with my emotions.
My eyes filled with tears. “Thank you for bringing me out here. That was so beautiful.” I lowered my head. Just needed a moment.
“It would have been a shame to have to enjoy this all alone,” he said.
Still trying to come to terms with the amazing spectacle we had just experienced, we sat a moment longer watching the last of the dolphins disappear in the distance.
“Uh-oh!” Kevin pointed towards the open end of the bay. “Whitecaps.” He started the motor and turned the skiff towards home. Within minutes, the breaking waves had moved much closer and the glassy smooth surface changed to ripples that grew into an uncomfortable lump. I’d heard San Diego fishermen talk about the lump in the sea. Now I knew what they were talking about.
“Hang on,” he said. “It could get bumpy. I’ll take us to the nearest point of land and then we’ll work our way home along the beach.”
I gripped the gunwales of the boat where they began to curve towards the bow. We bucked into the choppy whitecaps that had now overtaken us. In no time, the sleeves of my blue cotton shirt were soaked from the spray. Two-foot waves didn’t seem like much but they followed one after the other so briskly that the small skiff took a pounding. My stomach clenched into a knot of fear as we were tossed in every direction. I tightened my grip against the bouncing of the boat. More waves splashed over the bow, soaking the front of my shirt. I was glad the water was warm. It would have been an ordeal to be splashed with icy water every few seconds. The finer spray wet my face so the drops were running off my chin. I glanced at Kevin in the stern of the boat. He was completely dry except for a bit of salt spray in his hair. He looked so good and I could only imagine what I looked like. Drowned rats came to mind.
“We’re almost out of it,” Kevin yelled above the engine noise. He saw that I was bearing the brunt of the beating at the front of the boat. I could only nod as I looked over my shoulder at him.
Closer to the beach, we zigzagged to avoid rocks. Beaching the boat here would be difficult. We continued along the shoreline until we rounded a point and entered the mini bay where our own sheltered beach lay.
“Whew! That’s better,” I said.
We pulled the boat ashore and secured it with a line to a huge rock far above the high tide mark. Immediately, Kevin started apologizing.
I held up my hand. “Don’t. It was wonderful. Worth the beating we took on the way back.”
“Your beautiful hair.…”
My hands flew to my head. “My hair?”
“It’s such a mess!” Kevin pulled me close and hugged me, kissing my wet tangled hair. “I have a sun shower bag you can use.”
“I have one too. But I think, since I’m wet already, I’ll have a swim first and then rinse off with fresh water.”
“Good idea. I’ll join you.”
“Don’t forget to shuffle your feet in case of stingrays.”
“Stingrays!?”
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Cindy’s dolphin post: https://cindyknoke.com/2023/06/18/off-the-beaten-path-super-pods/
Thanks for reminding me of this wonderful time, Cindy.



June 19, 2023 at 9:58 am
That scene is the first thing I thought of when I saw the blog post, by you. I must check out Cindy’s post.
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June 19, 2023 at 10:45 am
Yes, she has beautiful photos of the dolphins.
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June 19, 2023 at 10:37 am
“Drowned rats.” LOL Hey, did the wave part happen to you and the captain as well as the dolphins?
I saw dolphins a lot when I lived in Florida and never tired of it. They’re so awesome. I never heard them make those sounds though. Even once when I was close to them on a boat I didn’t hear them making sounds. You described it beautifully.
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June 19, 2023 at 10:44 am
YES! I was the drowned rat. All the spray came over the front of the skiff while he sat high and dry and handsome in the back by the motor.
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June 19, 2023 at 11:02 am
😅😅😅
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June 22, 2023 at 7:36 pm
That’s a lovely story Anneli, you write so well and paint a vivid picture, it had me engrossed and I don’t read stories much at all anymore. I used to but nearly all of my reading now is to learn something either about history or a skill or hobby. Perhaps I do too much, I seemed to have more time when I was younger to read for fun.
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June 22, 2023 at 8:30 pm
Thanks for the kind words, Tone. There just isn’t enough time to read everything we want to read. The Captain is the same way – he reads more for information than just for pleasure. I think a balance of both would be good. The main thing is to read!
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June 19, 2023 at 11:24 am
Hi Anneli – I saw Cindy’s post yesterday and enjoyed seeing her dolphin pictures – what a nice tie-in to your book!
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June 19, 2023 at 1:44 pm
It was my first thought when I saw Cindy’s post because I’ve been there, done that, but on a smaller scale.
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June 21, 2023 at 6:18 am
😊
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June 19, 2023 at 11:30 am
I loved to read this book!
We´ve seen dolphins in Egypt but they didn´t make any noises. I’ve never seen a dolphin on the Charlottes but we saw whales a couple of times.
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June 19, 2023 at 1:43 pm
Thank you for reading Orion’s Gift, Ursula. I enjoyed living some of the scenes I wrote about.
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June 19, 2023 at 11:38 am
I viewed Cindy’s recent post on the dolphins, such a close parallel!
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June 19, 2023 at 1:47 pm
Yes, it is close; that’s why it reminded me of this right away.
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June 19, 2023 at 1:48 pm
👍🏻☺️
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June 19, 2023 at 1:03 pm
I love Cindy’s posts, and I’m glad the dolphins were just like the story in your book. Great excerpt!
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June 19, 2023 at 1:41 pm
Thanks, Jennie.
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June 19, 2023 at 3:54 pm
You’re welcome, Anneli.
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June 19, 2023 at 1:43 pm
I enjoyed Cindy’s post and the excerpt from your book. I’d love to see dolphins in the wild.
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June 19, 2023 at 1:46 pm
When we saw them, it was pure chance, but what wonderful sights and sounds to see and hear.
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June 19, 2023 at 6:06 pm
I saw these Dolphins in the water. Thanks for sharing this idea. Anita
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June 20, 2023 at 6:55 am
It’s been awhile since I read your book Orion’s Gift. Re-reading the excerpt was very pleasurable and I particularly enjoyed your description of the sounds of the dolphins. xx
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June 20, 2023 at 9:48 am
Thanks for reading it, Carol. I remember sitting in the boat with the motor turned off and hearing the sound of them communicating. It was eerie and so beautiful. One of the best things I’ve ever experienced.
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June 21, 2023 at 6:26 am
I remember camping and hearing for the first time the eerie, howling sound of a loon. At first it startled me and then I got to love that sound.
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June 21, 2023 at 7:47 am
I love it too. Sometimes in the early morning I can hear loons calling from our house (we’re not too far from the water) and I love that sound a lot.
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June 20, 2023 at 8:12 am
For all the diving I’ve done, I’ve never seen dolphins in the wild. I remember this scene, Anneli, and how amazing that it was based on your own experiences. Heading to Cindy’s now.
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June 20, 2023 at 9:50 am
It was a once in a lifetime event for me. I’ll remember it always.
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June 21, 2023 at 12:58 am
Beautiful scene! Sylvia and Kevin sounds like a couple I’d love to add to my fave romance novel couples.
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June 21, 2023 at 7:45 am
Thank you for visiting and reading. Kevin and Sylvia do have a hot and complicated romance. I had fun writing this novel. Hope you get a chance to read it someday.
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June 24, 2023 at 2:30 pm
Such intelligent and graceful animals. 🙂
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June 24, 2023 at 3:37 pm
They are, and so beautiful to watch.
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June 25, 2023 at 8:11 am
Anneli, wonderful writing and a beautiful dramatic scene. I love how you capture the wild emotions, not easy to show ‘Peaks of happiness and bottomless pits of misery’. Now, I hope Sylvia watches out for those stingrays!😀😀
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June 25, 2023 at 9:21 am
Thanks, Annika. I enjoyed writing this book because of having spent time in Baja, and in some ways it was like reliving the experience.
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June 25, 2023 at 8:25 am
I really enjoyed this gripping and adventurous scene, Anneli. You captured the boat ride really well, so real I felt a tad bit seasick. I especially liked the dolphin sighting and hearing them was magical. Lovely: “The mewling, whistling, singing, and crying, as they repeatedly broke the surface of the water, was an eerie choir piece.”
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June 25, 2023 at 9:23 am
It’s one of the parts of the book that was real when the Captain and I went to Baja, and I will never forgot how thrilling it was to hear the dolphins. Thanks for reading, Jet.
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July 5, 2023 at 5:29 am
Marvelous excerpt! Scene after scene rolls out like the wave of dolphins, seemingly endless. Nature takes a front seat throughout, and then the tranquility at the end is punctuated with another danger alert . . . stingrays?
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July 5, 2023 at 7:19 am
Those shorelines were loaded in stingrays as the weather got warmer (like in March).
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