I thought I’d try my hand at writing a sonnet. 14 lines in iambic pentameter (da-DAH, da-DAH, da-DAH, da-DAH, da-DAH), three stanzas of four lines and one of two. Rhyming pattern ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
It wasn’t as easy as I thought it would be.
A student teacher starting out anew,
Stood scared before a class of girls and boys,
She struggled to remember what to do,
And wondered how to teach with all that noise.
Her shaking hands, her quivering voice aside,
She took a breath and said to form a line.
“I’m happy to be teaching you,” she lied.
“It’s your first day of school, and also mine.”
“Please take your seats,” the bashful teacher said.
But one child called out loud, “I like your dress.”
“Why thank you dear. It seems we both like red.”
Her trepidation causing her distress.
September 8, 2022 at 11:16 pm
This is wonderful.
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September 9, 2022 at 8:13 am
Thank you, Cindy. I’m glad you liked it.
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September 9, 2022 at 12:03 am
Very nice picture and poem, I love it!
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September 9, 2022 at 8:06 am
Thanks, Ursula. That was from a little snippet of life that my sister Hanna told me about from her first day of practice teaching.
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September 9, 2022 at 6:30 am
That sounds like a hard form to me, Anneli. Good for you for giving it a try, and the result was wonderful. The last image of the urgent paddling feet was perfect. I couldn’t help but laugh. 🙂
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September 9, 2022 at 7:59 am
That came from my older sister who told me about her first day and how she felt.
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September 9, 2022 at 8:48 am
Wonderful imagery. It says so much.
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September 9, 2022 at 6:45 am
Nice sonnet. I find them hard to write and prefer haiku, simple rhyme or free verse.
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September 9, 2022 at 7:55 am
Thanks, Brad. I found it surprisingly difficult compared to the usual little ditties that roll off my tongue. A challenge, for sure.
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September 9, 2022 at 8:04 am
Kudos Anneli. I’m lazy!
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September 9, 2022 at 8:10 am
Haha. One day you’ll take up the challenge too. Maybe just to prove you can do it.
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September 9, 2022 at 8:48 am
Maybe, I’ve done a few new forms like etheree for Colleen’s Poetry challenges.
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September 9, 2022 at 9:01 am
I hope to check out some of her challenges one day soon.
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September 9, 2022 at 6:48 am
That was delightful. I felt that way my first day, thrown into a class, no teacher training classes, no nothing but hutzpah. Turns out that was enough!
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September 9, 2022 at 7:56 am
I think a lot of teachers go through that initial stage fright experience. Most of us survive it.
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September 9, 2022 at 8:47 am
Isn’t that true!
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September 9, 2022 at 7:07 am
Very impressive poem about the trepidation of a student teacher! It reminded me of my first feeble attempts at teaching math to a senior high class in Calgary.
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September 9, 2022 at 7:57 am
It will probably ring true for many teachers. Thanks, Peter.
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September 9, 2022 at 7:54 am
Love this! It’s so timely.
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September 9, 2022 at 8:11 am
Yes! I bet a lot of teachers have been sweating blood these past few days.
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September 9, 2022 at 9:27 am
Nice job. When I write poems, I just write what’s on my mind. They are never in proper stanzas. 🤷♀️ The poetry gods will scold me.
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September 9, 2022 at 9:35 am
I think it’s called free verse.
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September 11, 2022 at 6:34 am
Delightful!
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September 11, 2022 at 8:03 am
Thank you, Jennie.
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September 11, 2022 at 10:16 am
You’re welcome, Anneli.
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September 11, 2022 at 6:08 pm
Love this poem and a wonderful photo.
Anita
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September 11, 2022 at 6:10 pm
Thank you so much, Anita. My first effort at a sonnet. Hard work, and an odd set of rules for it.
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September 14, 2022 at 5:26 am
Honest verses! Anneli, these words take me back to my own journey when I stepped into Mr. Hart’s classroom as a student teacher (spring of 1978).
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September 14, 2022 at 8:05 am
Those days of insecurity and lack of experience.
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