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October – Goldengrove Unleaving

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Spring and Fall – by Gerard Manley Hopkins (1844 -1889)

to a young child

This poem is very famous and is taught in all the English classes in high school. Unfortunately, when we were in high school, we were too ignorant to really appreciate it.

Okay, not all of us were ignorant in high school, but I think it’s safe to say that many of us found this old poetry hard to understand with its twisted and jumbled sentence structure.

Here’s an example from Hopkins’ poem:

Leaves like the things of man, you
With your fresh thoughts care for, can you?

Why couldn’t the poets of that time, especially the English, just “speak English”? In those high school days, I remember thinking, what’s the good of a poem if I need someone to translate it to me (from English to English)? I still feel that way a little bit, but now, decades later, I can appreciate the language of poetry better.

BUT, having suffered through trying to understand this poem as a young adult, I now think of it every year at this time. As soon as our maple tree starts to lose its leaves, I find myself thinking (and my name is not Margaret),

“Margaret, are you grieving,

Over Goldengrove unleaving?”

And I always end up thinking, how incredibly sad it is to see those first leaves fluttering down, and I realize,

“It is Margaret that you mourn for.”

Here is Hopkins’ poem:

Spring and Fall

To a Young Child

Margaret, are you grieving
Over Goldengrove unleaving?
Leaves like the things of man, you
With your fresh thoughts care for, can you?
Ah! as the heart grows older
It will come to such sights colder
By and by, nor spare a sigh
Though worlds of wanwood leafmeal lie;
And yet you will weep and know why.
Now no matter, child, the name:
Sorrow’s springs are the same.
Nor mouth had, no nor mind, expressed
What heart heard of, ghost guessed:
It is the blight man was born for,
It is Margaret you mourn for.

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I have learned to appreciate good poetry, but I tend to like the kind that is more fun and less serious. Limericks, funny ditties, rhyming fun.

Still, I have my favourite serious poems too, which I hope to share with you sometime soon.

How do you feel about poetry?

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27 thoughts on “October – Goldengrove Unleaving

  1. John's avatar

    The sentences are certainly a bit twisted, difficult to unravel. As a writer, this must twist you, Anneli! 😂

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  2. shoreacres's avatar

    I love poetry, but some modern free verse doesn’t do it for me. If it’s nothing more than sentences broken up and rearranged on a page, it’s not necessarily poety (although some works very well). Hopkins’s poem is one of my favorites: one that I read and re-read so often I nearly have it memorized, and have used it in my blog at least two or three times.

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  3. Ursula's avatar

    When I was young I loved poetry. I bought many books with good poetry. Now in my old age I am not such a fan of it anymore and I wonder why.

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  4. Jacqui Murray's avatar

    I too remember that poem. I didn’t properly appreciate it in high school either.

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  5. Lynette d'Arty-Cross's avatar

    I did a degree in English Literature (many, many moons ago now – I don’t want to even hint at how many) and remember that one of the criticisms of the Victorian era poets (Manley fits right in there) was their focus on stuffy, flowery and unnecessarily wordy formats that stuck to metre over imagery. It was the prevailing style of the time. There was a lot of innovation then too – poets who were much more experimental – but Manley wasn’t one of them. Still, he really explores the idea that if we’re repeatedly exposed to profound loss that we may become used to it. Quite a depressing poem but then again, the Victorian age wasn’t the sunniest, either.

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    • wordsfromanneli's avatar

      Yes it is a bit depressing, but that’s why it makes my point about the leaves coming off and how it marks the end of another cycle of life. Still, not something I want to dwell on too long. There are beautiful things about autumn too.

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  6. Writing to Freedom's avatar

    Not my favorite language style for poetry either, but nice message.

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  7. Klausbernd's avatar

    Dear Anneli
    We don’t think that this poem is special. The flow of words is fine, but the syntactic structure is too forced to make the words rhyme. It’s not our kind of lyrics.
    The Fab Four of Cley
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

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  8. V.M.Sang's avatar

    This is a poem I’ve not come across before. A lovely evocation of both the seasons and life.

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  9. Lori's avatar

    I always felt reading poems was difficult because most are obscure. For me, a poem is a personal experience from the author, and usually an emotional experience. At least that’s how it is when I write one. Even if I’m writing about something I’ve experienced in nature, it’s how that nature makes me feel. Which I think is what was going on in that poem by Gerard Hopkins. 🤷‍♀️🙂

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  10. dgkaye's avatar

    Quite understandably why most teens weren’t bothered with poetry like this, deep and beyond their conception, even some adults. Personally, I enjoy some newer poetry, my favorite being free style. 😘

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  11. Jennie's avatar

    I was the teen who could never get into deep poetry.

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